2019-09-23 15:43:31 来源:启达教育网
孩子们之所以觉得看图写话难,主要原因还在于这三点:看图写话写不出、事件写不清、语句写不好。
XIEBUCHU,SHIBUHUIBUJU;XIEBUQING,SHIBUHUIJIEGOU;XIEBUHAO,SHIQUESHAOCIHUI。ZHENDUIZHEIXIE,JIJIAZHANGMENTIGONGXIAMIAN10GEJIQIAO,XIWANGNENGGOUJIEJUEHAIZIZHEIFANGMIANDEWENTI。
DAJIAYIDINGYAOZHUYI,JIQIAOSHIHUODE,XISHOUCAISHIGUANJIAN,JUYIFANSANJINXINGLIANXI,YAOZUODAORONGHUIGUANTONGCAIXING。WENMOYOUFULIE~
01
写眼不用“水汪汪”
XIEWAIMAO:XIELIANDANBUYAOYONG“YUANYUANDE”,XIELIANSEBUYAOYONG“HONGTONGTONG”,XIEYANJINGBUYAOYONG“SHUIWANGWANG”,XIEZUIBABUYAOYONG“XIAOXIAODE”,XIEERDUOBUYAOYONG“DADADE”,XIEGETOUBUYAOYONG“GAOGAODE”,XIESHENCAIBUYAOYONG“PANGPANGDE”。ZHEIXIEWANNENGCIHUI,HUIRANGHAIZISHIQUYUYANGEXING。XIEHUAQIBU,YAOHEHUHAIZIDELINGXING。
BIRUXIEZUIBAKEYIZHEIYANGSHUO:BABADEZUIBIHEMADEZUIHAIDA,DAGEPENTI,JIUNENGBAZIJICHUIDAOYUELIANGSHANG。BIRUHAIZISHUOMAMADEZHANGTOUFABISHENGZIYONGCHUDA,WANTIAOSHENG,MAMAZHIXUSHUAISHUAITOU。
CAOWENXUANZAI《CAOFANGZI》ZHONGMIAOXIEGUANGTOUDEJUZIJIUFEICHANGXINGXIANG。
TUHEDETU,SHIHENDIDAODE。TAYONGZHANGZHANGDEHAOKANDEBOZI,ZHICHENGQINEIMEYIKEGUANGLIULIUDENAODAI。ZHEIKENAODAIJUEWUYISIBANHEN,GUANGHUADEJINGRANNEIMEJUNYUN。YANGGUANGXIA,ZHEIKENAODAIXIANGDALELAYIBANLIANG,RANGTADETONGXUEMENWUDUANDIXIANGQI,YELITAYEHUILIANGDE。
ZHEIXIEYUYANKANQILAISUIRANYOUXIEKUAZHANG,DANQUENENGRANGHAIZIDEXIANGXIANGLIDEDAODUANLIAN,ZAIYIHOUDEZUOWENZHONGYECAIYOUNENGYOUZIJIDEXIANGFA。
02
写说不要直接“说”
XIEHUAZHIYOUGANBABADEJIJUZENMEBAN?JIANYISHI,RANGRENWUSHUOHUA。
JIZHU,YISHUOHUA,WENZIJIUDUOLE;YISHUOHUA,RENWUJIUHUOLE。DANSHIYAOZHUYI,XIEHUABUYAOZHIJIESHUO,BIRUXIAOXIONGSHUO、XIAOGOUSHUO、XIAOHONGSHUO、MAMASHUO、BABASHUO。
ERSHIYAOJIAYIGEDONGZUO:XIAOXIONGXIAOZHESHUO、XIAOGOUKUZHESHUO、XIAOHONGTIAOQILAISHUO、MAMAMOZHEWODETOUSHUO、BABASHENCHUSHOUSHUO。
HAIKEYIJIAYIGEBIAOQING:“XIAOXIONGDELIANHONGLE,XIAOZHESHUO”“XIAOGOUZHOUZHEMEI,KUZHESHUO”“XIAOHONGJINGYADITIAOQILAISHUO”“MAMALUCHUWEIXIAODEBIAOQING,MOZHEWODETOUSHUO”“BABALENGLEYIXIA,SHENCHUSHOUSHUO”DENGDENG。
03
写动至少三个“动”
KANJINGTU,NAOZILIYAONENGBIANCHENGDONGDEDONGHUAPIAN。TUSHANGZHINENGHUAYIGECHANGJING,NAOZILIYAOBAQIANMIANFASHENGDE、HOUMIANFASHENGDE,DOU“FANGYING”CHULAI。JIUXIANGKANMANHUAYIYANG,JIANGGUSHIBUQUAN。
HAIYAOXUEHUIDUOYONGBIAOSHIDONGZUODECI。YIGE,BUGOU;LIANGGEYEBUGOU;ZHISHAOYAOSANGE;WUGEGENGHAO。
BIRUXIAOHOUCHIXIANGJIAODETU,NAOZILIDONGHUAYAOLIANGUANFANGYING:XIAOHOUSANXIALIANGXIAPADAOSHUSHANG、YIBACHEXIAYIGEDAXIANGJIAO、BIZICOUSHANGQUWENWENXIANGWEI、YISHOUNAYISHOUBO、SHIJINGWANGZUILISAI、ZUIBACHENGDEGUGUDE、DAKOUDAKOUYAN、CACAZUI、PAIPAIDUPI。
DONGZUOYUEDUO,XIEHUAYUEJINGCAI。
04
有问就要有答
YOUSHI,BUZHIDAORENWUYINGGAISHUODIANSHA,GAOSUNIYIGEXIAOJUEQIAO:KEYIRANGQIZHONGYIGERENWUQUWEN。WENLE,JIUYAODA。YIWENYIDA,NEIRONGZENGDUOLE,RENWUBUGULINGLINGLE。
BIRUXIAOGANGJIMAMAXIJIAODEYIFUTU:KANDAOMAMATANGZAICHUANGSHANG,YANGZIHENPIBEI。XIAOGANGXIANGJIMAMAXIJIAO,BANGMAMAJIECHUPILAO。BUYAOZHIJIEDUANCHUPENLAIJIUXI。YAOWEN:“MAMA,WOKANNINLIANSEBUHAO,JINTIANHENMANGBA?”ZHEIYIWEN,MAMAJIUDEDA,“XIEXIEBAOBEIGUANXIN,JINTIANZHANZHEKAILEYITIANHUI,QUESHIYOUDIANLEI。”ZAIWEN,“MAMA,WOXIANGDUANSHUIJININXIXIJIAO,KEYIMA?”MAMAZAIDA,“WODEBAOBEIZHENHAO。”
05
有头就要有尾
XIAOPENGYOUJINGCHANGXIEZHEXIEZHE,JIUQIANYANBUDAHOUYU。DANGEJUZI,DOUDUI,DANSHILIANQILAI,QUEBUTONGSHUN。
BIRUXIAOPENGYOUTIQIUDEYIFUTU:KAITOUXIEXINGQITIANXIAWUTIANQIHENHAO;JIEZHE,XIEQIUCHANGSHANGJIGEXIAOPENGYOUTIQIU;RANHOU,XIETIANSHANGFEILAIYIQUNYANZI;HOULAI,XIEWANSHANGCHILEXIAOLONGBAO。
KAITOU,DUIDE,ZOUZHEZOUZHE,“MILU”LE。YOUKAITOUJIUYAOYOUJIEWEI。KAITOUHEJIEWEISHIYITIAOSHENGZIDELIANGTOU,LINQISHENGZILIANGTOU,ZHENGJIANSHIJIUCHUANQILAILE。SHANGMIANDENEIRONG,YINGGAIQUDIAO“TIANSHANGLAILEYANZI”,HAIYINGQUDIAO“WANSHANGCHIXIAOLONGBAO”,YAOXIETAMENZENMETIDE,ZUIHOUSHEIYINGSHEISHU,HEKANWANHOUXINLIDEGANSHOU。ZHEIYANGCAISHITONGSHUNDE。
06
最要紧的句子
DIYIJUHUAZUIYAOJIN。XIECHUDIYIJU,HOUMIANJUZIJIUGENZHE“LIUDA”CHULAILE。DIYIJUHUA,HENJIANDAN,ANZHAO“SHIJIAN、DIDIAN、RENWU、GANSHENME”,SIGEYAOSU,PINQILAI。
BIRUXIAOXIONGSAOLUOYEDEYIFUTU,DIYIJUHUASHI:QIUTIAN,JIEDAOSHANG,XIAOXIONGZAISAOLUOYE。
BIRUXIAOHONGFANGFENGZHENGDEYIFUTU,DIYIJUHUASHI:ZAOCHEN,GONGYUANLI,XIAOHONGZAIFANGFENGZHENG。
WEISHENMEXIANXIEDIYIJUHUA?YINWEIRENHEYIJIANSHI,SUOJIANDAOZUIHOU,JIUSHISHIJIAN、DIDIAN、RENWU、SHIQINGZHEISIGEYAOSU。DIYIJU,SHIZHONGXINJU。HOUMIANDEJUZI,DOUSHIDIYIJUDE“XIAOWEIBA”。
07
最可怕的毛病
ZUIKEPADEMAOBING,RENWUSHI“MUTOUREN”,SHI“XIAOYABA”。
YIFUBAOHUXIAONIAODETU,YIGETONGXUEXIE:“WOKANDAOXIAONIAOKUAIDIAOXIALAILE,WOJIULEXIAONIAO。”ZHEIJUHUALI,“KANDAOXIAONIAOKUAIDIAOXIALAILE”,JUTISHIZENMEKANDAODE,KANDAOXIANQINGHOULIANSHANGSHISHENMEBIAOQING?
“WOJIULEXIAONIAO”,JUTIZENMEJIUDE,SHOUSHANGZHUAQILESHENME,SHIZOUGUOQUHAISHIPAOGUOQU,SHIPASHUHAISHIQUBANTIZI,ZENMENAQIXIAONIAO,ZENMEBAXIAONIAOFANGDAOANQUANDIFANG,YOUMEIYOUFUMOXIAKEAIDEXIAONIAO?WOMENJIANJUEBUNENGDANG“MUTOUREN”“XIAOYABA”,YIDINGYAOSHANYUBIAODA。
08
写景有两条近路
XIEJING,HENRONGYIDIUFEN,YINWEIYOUDEXIEJINGTU,ZHIYOUCHUNCUIDEJING,MEIYOURENWU,MEIYOUDONGWU。
YOULIANGTIAOJINLUKEYIBANGDAOXIAOPENGYOU。DIYITIAOSHI“SHIJIANLU”。BIRU“JIAXIANGDEXIAOHE”:KEYIXIECHUNTIANDEXIAOHE、XIATIANDEXIAOHE、QIUTIANDEXIAOHE、DONGTIANDEXIAOHE。YEKEYIXIEZAOCHENDEXIAOHE、ZHONGWUDEXIAOHE、BANGWANDEXIAOHE。HAIKEYIXIEQINGTIANDEXIAOHE、YUTIANDEXIAOHE。
DIERTIAOLUSHI“KONGJIANLU”。HAISHI“JIAXIANGDEXIAOHE”:KEYIXIEXIAOHEDEYUANCHU、XIAOHEDEJINCHU。KEYIXIEXIAOHEDEKONGZHONG、XIAOHEDESHUIMIAN、XIAOHEDESHUIDI。
09
写物要会想东想西
XIEWU,YEBIJIAOTAOYAN。BIRUXIEYIGEPINGGUO,XIAONAODAILINALIYOUNEIMEDUOCIYA,BIELEBANTIAN,ZHINENGXIE:XINGZHUANGSHIYUANDE、YANSESHIHONGDE、MOZHESHIGUANGHUADE、YAOYIKOUSHITIANTIANDE。
YOUGEHAOBANFA,JIUSHIXUEHUI“XIANGDONGXIANGXI”:XINGZHUANGSHIYUANDE,KEYIXIANGYEYEJIAKETINGLINEIZHANDENGPAO,HAIKEYIXIANGWONEIGEYONGYUANCHIBUBAODEXIAOZHUCHUQIANGUAN。YANSESHIHONGDE,KEYIXIANGWOTOUTOUCAGUODEMAMADESAIHONG,HAIKEYIXIANGQIANLIANGTIANLAOSHIJIANGDEXIAOHONGHUA。
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看图写话就三步
DIYIBU,SHENGYIGEJUBAOBAO,XIEYIGESIYAOSUJUZI。BIRUXIAOHOUCHITAO,KEYIZHEIYANGXIE:ZAOCHEN,XIAOHOUZAIGUOYUANLICHITAOZI。
DIERBU,JUBAOBAOZHANGGAO,JIASHANGDONGZUO、BIAOQING。
BIANCHENG:ZAOCHEN,XIAOHOUZAIGUOYUANLICHITAOZI。NIKAN,XIAOHOUDUOMEKEAI:YIDUIDADADEERDUO,YISHUANGWULIULIUDEYANJING。TAOZIHONGHONGDE,KEXINXIANLE,JIUXIANGPANGWAWADEXIAOLIANDAN。
DISANBU,JUBAOBAOBIANMEI,JIASHANGYUYAN、XINLIHEBIYU。
ZUIHOUBIANCHENG:ZAOCHEN,XIAOHOUZAIGUOYUANLICHITAOZI。NIKAN,XIAOHOUDUOMEKEAI:YIDUIDADADEERDUO,YISHUANGWULIULIUDEYANJING。TAOZIHONGHONGDE,KEXINXIANLE,JIUXIANGPANGWAWADEXIAOLIANDAN。XIAOHOUXIANG:XIANZAIDETAOZIYOUDAYOUHONG,WOKEYOUKOUFULE。TADUNZAIDISHANG,PENGZHETAOZI,CHIDEJINJINYOUWEI,HENKAIXIN。XIAOHOUZIYANZIYUDISHUO:“ZHEITAOZIYOUDAYOUHONG,CUICUIDE、TIANTIANDE,ZHENHAOCHIA!”